Friday, March 2, 2012

All Quiet on the Western Front- Writing Response #1

Throughout history, women have been recognized as weaker, less significant, and even powerless compared to men. Rights were given to women after they fought for them, whereas with men, the rights were obvious and natural. Even in today’s society, although men and women are equal, being called a “girl” is not a compliment. In All Quiet on the Western Front, this man versus woman idea is becoming a motif.

In the first two chapters of the novel, a couple instances have appeared in which a man is called a girl and it is evidently not meant to be a flattering remark. The narrator of the story, Paul, makes a comment about his friend; “[Kemmerich] couldn't stand cigarettes. His skin was very white; he had something of the girl about him.” There is something unique about Kemmerich, and for this, he gains a reputation as a girl, losing his manliness. Our society has convinced us all that everyone is equal; however, this is obviously not true when calling someone a girl is an insult. Women have gained many important rights, but until the walls are completely broken down, a “girl” will still be known as a pathetic and fragile creature.

2 comments:

  1. I never thought about this idea but now that I read your response it all makes sense. This was a really good idea and you have a good response. Your word choice was good but could have been improved but it was overall very good. :)

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  2. I really like this! Your voice is very strong. You could have used stronger diction but overall it was really well written. Great job!

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